Friday, December 12, 2008

Spoiler...

Since I wasn't going to be writing the full text here, I'll just write it in some sort of verse accompanied by a picture or two.


Silent stillness,
unnatural quiet.
Tree's whispers
in my ears
warning me.
Darkness around me
as I walk closer.
The cool breeze
everything is uncanny.
Crouching low
I make not a sound
I fear for my life
so I hide.

Further away
I can never look back.
My path is made for me.
It would be long, and hard.
But I had to take it.


This picture doesn't really have much to do with the text... But I thought it was kind of cool.
These pictures are from the same hike that the other pictures from my earlier post are from.

Thursday, December 11, 2008

Idea...

So.. I'm just thinking that maybe I shouldn't post everything I've written on here... instead, I know that if you have a gmail account I can keep you posted on the exact things I'm writing though google documents... so please let me know if you want me to set that up.

Instead on here I'll just keep posting pictures, maybe some "spoilers"... I'll keep things about the stories and the character's on here...

Also, for those who are confused somewhat to what Deirdre has to do with Kailei... Kailei is Deirdre's aunt. Just at the point you've read so far in the story she doesn't have a niece yet.

Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Hike at Decew Falls

Some of the imagery I use in short stories of idea's come from place's I've hiked and been at.

I always liked this picture

I love this oak tree. Just imagine a forest filled with them.

Kailei Cont'd

Farm life was good for our family. My father woke up for early mornings with my brothers, and soon after my mother got up with me and my sisters. We would bake and fry up our breakfast while the men did the early morning chores that needed to be done, then they would all come in and we would sit down as a family together. My father was at the head of the table with my mother on his right. On his left sat Dierdan, Aideen sat beside him, and I by her. Beside my mother sat Eryn and Naomh, with Faelan at the end of the table. Breakfast was usually quiet, except for this morning my father spoke in hushed tones to my mother. His usually serene eyes were filled with concern and worry, my mother's face was the picture of calmness and confidence. From the far corner of the table I could only hear snatches of the conversation.
"Coming-"
"Don't know I'm here-"
"What about-?"
"Long time ago-"
I looked up to see if Dierdan or Aideen were listening to see them staring into their food slowly eating with a concentrated and confused look on their faces. They were listening. I decided that I would ask one of them about it later.
The rest of the morning went on as usual, with no talk of anything strange. Right after breakfast Aideen made mother sit down with a cup of tea and cleared the table with Eryn. Naomh started to sweep up the dining area as I sat down beside my mother. I looked up at her and saw her mulberry eyes staring off into the distance. Worry etched a small crease into her brow, and her lips were slightly pressed together, then separated as she let out a small sigh. Her eyes glanced down to me and her face softened a bit.
She got up slowly, and put her un-touched cup of tea back onto the table. She took my small hand into her delicate one and led me towards the door. "I shall be out for a short walk with Kailei, Aideen. I think some fresh air would do me good." Aideen just looked up from her task and acknowledged her with a slight nod of her head. There was still slight traces of the morning dew on the green grass as we walked over it towards the old oak tree. My mother sat down on the bench and I faced her expectantly. "Some things are inherited through their parents, others are not. And then there are some things that will skip a generation or two before a descendant inherits. I had hoped..." her voice trailed away for a moment. A small sigh escaped her lips before she continued, "I had hoped my daughter would not grow to be so beautiful. Do not be ashamed of what you are. People cannot understand that there is good in a tainted race. Those who will trust you will be few." She took me into a hug and silently weeped. We stood there for a while like that. I tried to comfort her, not knowing what was wrong. I heard her whisper softly, "I'm sorry..." She let go of the embrace and took my hand again, silent as ever I walked with her the short distance across the grass towards our humble home.

-edited dec 12 '08-

Kailei

The two of us lay there staring at the sky. Two sisters who could not be more different. She was fourteen, I was five. The elder girl lay on the soft grass with her hands behind her head. Her eyelids drooped over her bright blue eyes, and her golden hair that shone in the sunlight was fanned all about her. She looked to be tall, and slenderly built. She looked carefree and happy. As though she had no worries in the world.
"Doesn't that one look like a bird?" She looked at me and pointed to some clouds which did look like a bird. I continued staring at the sky without speaking. Out of the two of us, I was the more silent one. "My little silent shadow," is what Aideen had sometimes called me with a smile brightening her face.
The slow ever changing clouds whirled in white shapes and forms above me with the sky blue behind them. I lay there in silent serenity as my sister got up and wandered aimlessly through the field in search of flowers.
The grass was soft beneath my slight figure, and the sun was warm on my clear light skin. The wind blew my dark loose curls around my face as the tree's in the near distance whispered their sweet secrets to one another. A brown bird darted through my view of the sky and captured my attention. The small brown creature darted into the first tree on the edge of the forest and joined in its small chirps with the countless other birds of the forest.
I looked up and saw my sister with a small bunch of lilies walking towards me. "Come now, we should be heading back dear one." She gave me a warm smile as her dainty hand closed around my small childish one.
"Why don't we walk through the forest Deeny?" Aideen looked down at me mildly surprised that I had spoken.
"We have our reasons, little one. Why should you wish to walk through there anyways?" A silence stretched out as I looked up through my small dark eyes to her bright blue ones.
I whispered so that Aideen could not hear me, "Because the tree's feel like home."


At age five I had a good childhood and family. I was the youngest of the six children of Conn. My five elder siblings were not full of the same blood as I, we only shared fathers. My eldest brother, Dierdan, was a dark blonde youth of sixteen. Other than his hair color, he was the spitting image of our father with his sturdy build, large hands, his grey blue eyes, and his strong features. His face was eager to break into a smile whenever possible, and his eyes always had warmth in them.
Then came Aideen with her bright clear blue eyes with no trace of dull grey, but shone with a bright diamond like glitter. Her golden hair was usually tied back into a loose braid when she worked around our farm. She was my mother's right hand, and could do things even my mother could not. She had a natural talent for herbs, poultices, and salves. When she wasn't busy baking in the kitchen helping mother, or cleaning out the house with her younger sisters, you would see her walking with her small bundle towards a neighbors home. Her herbs healed many sick, and with the village doctor getting on in age, she was needed much.
Then after her came the twins. You'll never know twins more unalike in so many ways. There was Faelan, at age eleven he was a robust young fighter. His dirt brown hair had a slight curl to it and his deep eyes were dark brown. Unlike his father or elder brother, he wanted to be a warrior, not a simple farmer. After his chores around the farm, he would be running around with his village friends with his wooden sword. His mischievous deeds usually got him in trouble... when they could catch him.
His twin sister Eryn was much different than him. She was quiet and reserved. She always gave us the impression that she was deep in thought. Whenever she was asked to do anything, she would without a word do what was asked and silently got it done. Her dark brown hair like her brother had loose curls. That with her pale skin, deep brown eyes, and slight frame gave her an enchanting look. At age eleven she looked to be much older than her age, mostly because of the wisdom that seemed to be in her thoughtful eyes.
Then there was my sister who was only a year younger than her twin siblings. It was when she was born that their mother had died. Naomh was, as others say, the living image of her mother. She had the golden hair like her mother, with the slight loose curl. Her eyes were the crystal green eyes that her mother had. She was slight, and fragile looking, but like her mother, she was strong. She had a strength of will and a deep patience that outlasted any others. She smile was the warm inviting smile that many loved of her mother.
Then there was me and my mother. Some say that my mother was one of the faerie folk that mesmerized my father so deeply that he could not help himself as he fell in love. Their accusations of her being a faerie were not ones that came out of nowhere, for she had the eyes of a faerie, the build of one, and the enchanting look of one. After he announced his desire to marry her those years ago, many advised him against it not trusting my mother. Any reason that could be set up against her was. Some said there was too much an age difference, her being twenty one while he was thirty two, some said that she would not be able to handle the work of a housewife of a man with such a holding as his.
But he reasoned out every excuse, and still married her. Her almost black hair cascaded down her back like a midnight waterfall, her slight hands were soft to the touch, her face was both innocent, and motherly. And her eyes. Her eyes were a deep purple with small streaks of silver. And her ears were unusual, for they were slightly pointed at the tips. Upon first glance you might miss it, but a second careful glance would reveal it.
She treated the other villagers with kindness, and she raised her husbands children with care and love. Soon the village's small protests were quieted, and she became accepted.
A year after their marriage, she gave birth to me, his daughter.
I had inherited my mothers dark brown hair, and her deep purple eyes that were clear with a sparkle of silver in them. I was accepted by my half brothers and sisters as though we shared both father and mother. I grew up as Aideen's silent shadow, following her as she made her small rounds to the villagers, helping her in the kitchen, which I loved doing because of all the small tidbits she would drop into my tiny hands as she worked.
"Kailei, would you please carry this for me?" She asked one day as we made our way to a neighbor's home. She held out her bundle to me, and after I took it into my hands she stooped down to inspect a plant that had caught her interest. She took out her small pocket knife from her front pouch and cut off some leaves from the plant. "This would be nice for in mother's tea to help with the baby she's carrying."
"Deeny, whats wrong with the baby?" She looked up at me surprised.
"Nothing is little one, Mother and baby are both healthy. These herbs are going to make both of them healthier, thats all." She took the bundle from my hands and added the herbs to the items in there.
"Am I going to have a little brother or a little sister?" I looked up at Aideen expecting an answer.
"We do not know yet, Kailei. It will only be less than a month till the new baby is born, will then be able to see."
"Ok Deeny, I'll wait." I smiled up at my big sister to see her looking ahead with a worried expression in her eyes.

The Stone Figure


Deirdre


The pain seared through my whole body as I was rooted to the spot. Every part of me screamed to run away, to hide from her, but I couldn't move. The agony seeped into every corner of my body and my mind screamed silent pleas.


It had been too many years to count since the enchantment fell on me. I still remembered that day as though it had happened yesterday. I could almost still feel the searing pain race through my veins when memory of it came. But, of coarse I no longer had veins.

I was stone.

I held the same position while seasons came and went for many years. Deep in the forest I sat, always watching, always waiting. My deep brown hair, long and wild, my pale beautiful skin, my curious brown eyes, and even my long flowing skirt was now stone.

All on me was stone, all but the red scarf around my neck.

I could not turn to look at it, no, but others have. Sometimes a young girl or boy would wander into the small clearing and stare at me with wonder. None of them knew me I suppose, for it had been many years that I'd been here. Most of them just walked up and looked at my shoulders at the strange scarf. Some of them would try to pull on it to take it, but it wouldn't move. And the curious thing was though, whenever one tried to take it, a crow would come and chase them off. This crow seemed to be a guardian of sorts.

I knew the scarf held the clue to releasing me, for I had never owned a red scarf in my life. The biggest mystery was not how it came to be there, but why none could lift it.

None could, till he came along.


Tomas


“Tomas, get your nose out of that book of yours and come help me.” My older brother Rowan startled me. I looked up at him from my spot at the base of the tree.

“What do you want now Rowan?” I asked with a small sigh. Because he was older, I always seemed to have to be his shadow helping him all the time. I didn't mind most of the time though. Being as shy and hesitant as I was I could not do much without him.

“We are supposed to start on the wood pile. Its not going to be long before we will be needing it.” He walked towards me and handed me an ax. Without another word I followed him into the woods.

The tree's near our cottage produced wood that burnt too fast. This was now to be our second winter away from court, and we wouldn't make the same mistake again.

We went further into the forest looking for good wood. It wasn't long until we came to a grove of strong solid trees.

We then started to work on the hard task of chopping down some these large trees.

“Put your back into it Tomas!” Rowan said angrily. Then he mumbled, “I bet your mind is off into one of those books of yours. The boy more than likely would not know an ax from a tree if his precious books did not tell him.”

His words stung, but as usual, I tried to ignored them. I wasn't as strong as he was, so it stood to reason that I could not do as much as him.

Today though, I felt a bit of anger well up in me, but not enough to do something. I just mumbled under my breath about how I, at least was not a simpleton and could read.

“What was that?” Rowan peered at me questioningly

“Nothing.” I had to let it go. There was nothing I could do but continue to ignore his hurtful comments. “I am going to take a break for a little while. I will come back soon.”

Without waiting to hear his reply, I turned on my heels and walked quickly towards what seemed to be a clearing.

My father, mother, and even my older brother always were disappointed in me for not being what they had wanted me to be. I was always expected to be either a fighter or a farmer. My father was once a knight of the king, but after many years of faithful service, and a newly made wound to his knee, the king granted him a small lot of land in which to farm with his sons. My eldest brother was not Rowan, no,there was another older yet than him. My eldest brother was now away taking up the place of his father as a knight. Rowan was always more a settled one though, so he chose to take up farming his fathers lands. My grandfather was also a farmer, and my parents found no shame in the hard labor of the large task of farming lands.

I was different though, I had not shown qualities of either.

Life back in court held many opportunities to read, write, and learn from scribes and learned men. There were libraries filled with stacks of books in which to learn more from.

My favorite books to read always had something to do with history of these lands, or the legends of the former people who dwelt in them.

I continued on, not being far from where my brother was still chopping wood. A small clearing seemed to be ahead, so I walked on a little longer.

I snapped back into the present as I walked into the clearing. There, in the middle of the clearing was a statue of a fair young maiden. So intricate were the details of this statue, it looked as though she could, at any moment, get up and walk towards me.

Small creeping plants twined around her, and moss also grew on her. Though, as old as it seemed, the stone in no way was crumbling or cracking. The strangest part of this statue though, was the vibrant blood red scarf laying on her shoulders. Not a single stain or blemish was upon the scarf.

I heard someone coming up from behind me in the woods.

“Tomas, look, I'm sorry. You need not get so upset about it!” When I didn't respond for a long time, he let out a small exasperated sigh, and sat on the ground near the statue. “Might as well eat now, good time as ever...” He mumbled.

“Rowan, look.” I pointed towards the statue. My brother had paid no mind to it. Clearly he didn't think anything unusual about it.

“Yes Tomas, its very nice.” He spoke as if I was a young boy showing him something simple.

“Do you not think it odd? Look, it surely must have been here many years, and yet on the statue itself shows no sign of age or blemish.And look at the red scarf on her. It is without any stain.”

My brother looked mildly annoyed with me now. “I'm betting that the scarf was just placed there by a wayward child.” To prove his point he walked up to the statue and reached for the scarf. Suddenly, a crow darted out of the nearest tree, and stood defensively on the scarf. Every time Rowan reached and got near it, the bird let out another screech.

Even with the bird there, Rowan still tried to take the scarf. The scarf did not come off, it was as if the scarf too was stone.

I walked up to the statue too, and after Rowan decided to give up on trying to retrieve the scarf, I reached up and touched it.

“Its no use Tomas, the thing is stone too. Besides, the bird will probably give you something to think about.”

When I got near the statue, the crow took one good look at me, then flew away. Rowan's eyes must have mirrored my own shock, for upon my touch, the scarf fell to the ground. It was as if my touch released it from the statue.

“I must have loosed it when I tried to take it off,” Rowan stood up and snatched the scarf off the ground. “Mother will be happy to have something to keep her warm this winter.”

“Rowan, give it back.” Something in my voice must have shocked Rowan, for immediately he obeyed. I did not know why I had reacted the way I just had. It confused me more than Rowan.

The scarf was blood red, with intricate patterns on the side that we had seen. I turned it over to inspect the other side. This had a riddle on it, and it read like this:


The scarf has been taken, the guardian you passed

To break this spell, I give you one last task.

For stone I was, and stone I will be.

Until the day, when you can release me.


The verse was confusing. A spell? What was this about a guardian? Then I thought of the crow that had given my brother such a hard time.

I continued reading message on the scarf.


Travel over lands you've never seen before,

travel over hills, through forests and more.

Retrieve my sister scarf, and put her on stone,

still though, my dear brother, your task is not done.

Though questions come in many a call,

to break this spell, do not answer at all.

When you've kept your secret, I promise to you,

this girl will be released, and all will be true.

Happiness you will have and joy a plenty,

but not, my dear sir, if you come back home empty.


My mind whirled with the enormity of what had just happened. This was no statue, no, it was a fair young maiden trapped in stone. I looked at the figure again, it was no wonder she seemed so lifelike.

I had a decision to make, would I do what was asked of me? Would I go searching over hills, through forest, and in foreign countries to free her? Would I be able to keep this secret? And would the promise that was given me that this figure of a maiden would become flesh be true?

I turned to look at Rowan who was lazily asleep in the shade of a tall oak. I would leave them, I would leave them all and make my own fortune in traveling, and in breaking the spell set upon her.

I would leave at first light tomorrow.


Deirdre


And so, he came. He spoke not of it to his companion, which I later found out to be his elder brother.

All through the long days of waiting after that, I always thought of his dark brown hair. I thought of his bright, kind blue eyes that looked upon me with awe. The same eyes that read the scarf with understanding, became full of fierce determination.

I also remembered how his brother looked down on him and ordered around like that of a servant, and how the one with dark hair always obeyed.

My fate now rested in the hands of the one that was called Tomas. With all my heart I wished him to succeed.


Tomas


It had been hard to leave without any explanations. My mother was distraught, and my brother confused. But I was sure that soon they would forget me. I would be gone a long time, for I had not much basis on where to go to search for this twin red scarf.

I had read alot in my youth about legends and myths, and one of them contained a magical red scarf. The storyteller swore that it was true. I remembered little to none of this story, but it was what I had based my journey on. I had to, for there was nothing else I could do.

Rowan -2 years later-


“Is that dear Tomas?” Asked my mother getting up from the seat by the window. “Oh, Rowan! Rejoice, for my son has come back home!”

I looked up bewildered from where I was by the table. Tomas? Back here home? Why, that fellow had been gone almost two years now. It couldn't be him. He'd vanished without any explanation.

I remembered how my heart had been heavy with guilt, for I thought it had been because of me that he had left. I always played over and over in my mind all things I had said to him, and all the times I looked down on him because of who he was. The day he left was the day I found out how much I really loved him. He was my brother, and had always been there for me, whether it was to help with chores, for advice, or if it was to get out of trouble when we were young.

I hastily went to the window to see an older version of my brother walking towards the cottage. I broke into a big smile, and my brown eyes misted over. I ran towards him, shouting his name.

Time seemed to slow down as he looked up at me. His eyes seemed to be filled with new knowledge, and his once akward smile was now confident. The rolled up sleeves of his tunic revealed a new large scar. I could only imagine what a journey he had to have changed from an insecure youth eight of ten to a young confident man of twenty.

As soon as I reached him I pulled him in a fierce hug, I held onto him tight, not wanting to let him go.

“I thought you were dead. When you left and we had no news of you, we thought you had died.”

“Oh Rowan, I missed you all so much.” As I pulled away I saw Tomas's eyes mist up.

Just then I noticed that behind my brother was the figure in the forest. She was not stone though, no, she was breathing and alive. Her deep brown hair that was once locked in stone, now fanned around her in a wild way and framed her beautiful face. Her large brown eyes looked curiously up at me from the spot behind my brother. She was a young woman, and looked about seven of ten. Her long flowing dress was the color of the stone she had been imprisoned in. And the scarf that seemed to only be fit for a queen rested upon her graceful shoulders. She wore it well, and with pride.

“This is Deirdre, the statue in the forest,” his eyes grew brighter and his his smile lit up as he looked back at her and winked. Deirdre blushed and smiled shyly back, her eyes full of adoration and trust. “There is plenty of time for explanations and stories later, but right now I think I can smell some of mother's good cooking from over here. And trust me, I've waited a long time to eat that good food again.”

I could not help but notice as we were walking towards our home how different Tomas was, and how his eyes always softened when he looked at Deirdre. They looked at each other as though there was no one else in the world but them two. I didn't know what had happened, and how Tomas had released her, but I knew from then on that they would always be together.


Tomas


It had been many years since the long journey. And now me and my wife, Deirdre, had two children, and a third on the way. I never forgot the magical way she had turned from stone to flesh when I placed the much sought after scarf around her shoulders.

The moment she looked at me for the first time, and I at her, I knew the promise that was made was fulfilled. I had not known such happiness and joy as I had since then.

I would always remember what Deirdre told me of the long years of waiting for someone to come along that could lift the scarf, and so lift the spell. She told me of many who had tried to take the scarf, but always the crow would scare them off, for they were not the right one.

I also had many memories that I kept to myself of the long, hard journey. Most of it still at times made me wake in the night with terrors. Things had happened that I would always be scarred with. Deirdre helped me heal some of the wounds. And now I once again could say I was a happier man because of her.

When I came home though, not everything was as happy as I had wished it to be. My father's chair by the hearth was empty, and so it had been for a not even a month before I came home.

I had known sorrow that day, and I did grieve over my father, but I had my whole life ahead of me. And I was sharing it with with my angel.

New Blog

I wanted to write my story, but my other blog has my poetry, free verse, and random musings on it.. so instead of cluttering up that blog (or rather writing huge long posts that people will never be able to see past) I'm starting a new one.

So, please write comments on what you think of the story so far, what you think should or could be changed, or anything that you don't like about it.

For now, the plan is to write the story on Kailei. This is Deirdre's Aunt. At this point there is no Deidre. If you've read "The Stone Figure" then you'll know who she is. I have a bit of a plan for two stories, the first is about Kailei, the second is basically making the story of Deidre longer, and explaining more (and maybe changing it a bit)

I'll post my short version of the Stone Figure, and then the beginnings of my story of Kailei in the next posts.

Enjoy :-)